英語(yǔ)六級(jí)熱點(diǎn)高分范文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic High Salaries or Career Development? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)有的大學(xué)畢業(yè)生選擇工作時(shí)主要看重高工資，而有的則認(rèn)為良好的職業(yè)發(fā)展空間才是更重要的'
2)闡述他們各自的考慮
3)表明你的看法
High Salaries or Career Development?
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行文思路
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出兩種不同的選擇，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分別闡述這兩種選擇各自的理由，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求表明“我”的看法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為對(duì)比選擇型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：指出大學(xué)畢業(yè)生選擇工作時(shí)不同的側(cè)重點(diǎn)：注重高工資和注重職業(yè)發(fā)展空間;對(duì)比闡述他們各自的理由;表明“我”的傾向并說(shuō)明理由。
高分范文
High Salaries or Career Development?
There are more and more people looking for jobs every year, but they have different views about what kind of job they should choose. [1]Some of them focus their attention on the jobs that promise high salaries. [1]Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.
[2]People holding the first view usually think that more money will result in more happiness. [3]With a lot of money in hand, they will be able to enjoy a rich life. Otherwise, they will suffer from depression [4]due to lack of enough money. [2]However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible. [5]It is career development that counts most. Without development, you will be outrun by others and fall behind the times sooner or later.
In my view, career development is the right choice because career may give us long term satisfaction [6]while high salary would give us short term happiness. Besides, [7]generally speaking, a good career development will bring high salaries sooner or later. So I will [8]give my vote to the career development first and then high salaries.
【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】
[1]用于引出兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)或傾向。
[2]用于對(duì)比分析兩種觀點(diǎn)各自的理由。
[3]“with+賓語(yǔ)+賓補(bǔ)”的獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)充當(dāng)狀語(yǔ)。
[4]“因?yàn)槿卞X”。
[5]強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，此處是強(qiáng)調(diào)句子的主語(yǔ)。
[6]while引導(dǎo)比較狀語(yǔ)從句，意為“然而”。
[7]“一般來(lái)說(shuō)”。
[8]“選擇”。
佳句臨摹
1.佳句：Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.
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2.佳句：However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible.
臨摹：然而，持第二種觀點(diǎn)的人認(rèn)為體育明星們?yōu)樯鐣?huì)做出了杰出的貢獻(xiàn)，因此應(yīng)該得到特殊待遇。
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3.佳句：Career may give us long
ng term satisfaction while high salary would give us short term happiness.
臨摹：我們之間的共同之處使我們的關(guān)系牢固，而不同之處則都會(huì)我們?nèi)绾蜗嗷ダ斫狻?/p>
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【KEY】
1. In recent years, there are more and more people who have showed a preference for western fast food.
2. However, the holders of the second view argue that since sports stars have made great contributions to the society, they deserve some special treatment.
3. The similarity between us makes our relationship solid while the difference teaches us how to understand each other.
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